Nice...
This is pretty sweet, I like what I hear.
Nice melodies, and terrific harmony work...I can definitely see this in an RPG game.
The drums are a nice touch, you had some cool beats in there.
Only one thing I would change...the piano is a little bit too preset-ful...FL Keys isn`t that great by itself, by with some effects you can get some cool sounds out of it. When I get back, I can send you the mixer preset I use (with EQ, Reverb, and such). It`s pretty basic, but sounds quite good and you can tweak it to your liking. :)
You get a 10 from me, cus it`s a nice song. The ending works well, I forgot to mention. What did you use to do that? Edison, Wavepad? It`s executed quite nicely.
Keep it up!
-Exodus